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Pick the service that matches what you are selling. Pick the tier that matches how deep you want us to go.
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A clear written report on one landing page, sales page, or service page. We read it the way a sceptical buyer would, then tell you what is costing you the sale, what to fix first, and the order to make every change.
The page. The literal copy and structure. What the visitor actually sees in the first eight seconds.
The offer. What the buyer is being asked to do, whether the value matches the ask, and where the offer breaks down.
Trust signals. Reviews, proof, named buyers, social proof above the fold, and what is missing.
The call to action. Where the button goes, what it asks for, and whether a buyer can decide before clicking.
The order to fix things in. Not every issue at once. The single biggest miss first, then the next.
Quick Read
Within 2 days.
£15
- The single biggest miss on the page
- The first thing a sceptical buyer flags
- One concrete fix to try this week
Full Review
Within 2 days.
£45
- A comprehensive written report
- What works, where trust leaks, why visitors leave
- A clear list of fixes in the order to make them
- Tested hypotheses for what to try next
Review and Rewrite
Within 3 days.
£125
- The full review
- A rewrite of the weakest section, ready to paste in
- One follow-up review within a week
Headline Pack.
Rewritten headlines for one page. Each headline written for a specific kind of buyer, with a clear report on why it works and which one to test first.
Who you are selling to. Not just one buyer. The three or four kinds of buyer that arrive at your page with different reasons.
The headline as a promise. What it says, what it commits to, and what a buyer expects to find on the next scroll.
Voice and tone. Words you would actually say. Words that match what your buyer thinks before they click.
The reasoning. Every rewrite comes with a brief explanation. You know why it works, not just that it does.
Quick Pack
Within 24 hours.
£15
- 3 rewritten headlines
- One buyer angle
- Brief reasoning on each
Full Pack
Within 24 hours.
£25
- 5 rewritten headlines
- One per buyer type
- Full reasoning on each
- A recommendation on which to test first
Pack and Rewrite
Within 48 hours.
£45
- The full pack
- A rewrite of your opening paragraph
- Ready to paste in
Email Campaign Review.
A welcome campaign, a recovery flow, or a cold outreach campaign read end to end. We tell you what loses a sceptical buyer between subject line and click, and what to fix first.
Subject lines. The reason someone opens the email at all. Or doesnt.
The first line. What appears in the preview pane and whether it earns the scroll.
The body. The promise, the proof, the friction that loses the buyer mid-read.
The call to action. What the email asks for, whether the ask matches the promise, and where the link goes.
The sequence. How the emails build on each other. Where the campaign loses its through-line.
Quick Review
Within 2 days.
£45
- The biggest miss across one short sequence
- One fix per message
- Subject line audit on each
Full Review
Within 2 days.
£85
- End-to-end review of one campaign
- Subject lines, opens, the body, the CTA
- The throughline across the sequence
- A clear list of fixes in order
Review and Rewrite
Within 3 days.
£145
- Full review
- A rewrite of the weakest subject line
- A rewrite of the weakest call to action
Pitch Deck Review.
A fundraising or sales deck read slide by slide. We tell you where the story breaks, which slide is doing the wrong job, and what to cut first.
The slide level. Each slide read for the single message it carries and whether it lands.
The story arc. How the deck builds. Where it loses the room. Where the energy drops.
The promise. What you are asking for and whether the deck earns the ask by the time it makes it.
The cuts. What does not belong. What is doing the wrong job. What you should remove before you send.
Quick Review
Within 3 days.
£75
- Slide-by-slide notes
- What works and what does not on each
- The single weakest slide named
Full Review
Within 3 days.
£125
- Slide-by-slide notes
- The story arc analysed
- Where the deck loses the room
- The cuts you should make first
Review and Rewrite
Within 4 days.
£195
- Full review
- A rewrite of the three slides costing you the most
- Ready-to-paste copy
The Full Crux.
All four reviews in one package. We read your site, your headlines, your email campaign, and your pitch deck, then send the throughline that ties every fix together. The complete edit on how you sell.
All four surfaces. Site, headlines, email campaign, pitch deck. Every place a buyer encounters you.
The throughline. The story that should be the same across all four. Where it fragments, and where to align.
The compound fix. Not four separate fix-lists. One ordered list of changes that pulls every surface in the same direction.
The biggest single change. If you only do one thing across all four surfaces, this is it.
Standard
Within 5 days.
£115
- Quick tier of all four reviews
- Each one delivered together
- Saves £35 against ordering separately
Full
Within 7 days.
£225
- Full tier of all four reviews
- The throughline that ties every fix together
- One ordered list across every surface
- Saves £55
Plus
Within 10 days.
£395
- Plus tier of all four reviews
- All rewrites included
- The complete edit
- Saves £115
How ordering works.
Click the order button on the tier you want. A pre-filled email opens in your mail client. Add your link, your buyer notes, and anything else we should know, then hit send. We reply within one business day to confirm the brief and the delivery date.
If you would rather not use email, send the same info to hello@cruxlab.xyz directly.